Final Draft
Tom sent me a completed first draft of his script today. We have continually sent it back and forth with changes and comments, which meant it has constantly been evolving, but this was the first time it is been readable from beginning to end. It still needs some work on phrasing at some points, and needs to be cut down, and I have made suggestions about what I think works and what doesn’t. Overall it is progressing very nicely (a lot better than my script!) and it should soon be getting very polished.
As far as my script goes, I went to put the finishing touches to it but when I opened it it was a very initial draft! The newer version seems to have somehow disappeared into the metasphere! I am going to rewrite it using Final Draft rather than MS Word for easy of writing. I can almost call it a second draft, since I’m not going to try and replicate the first, but rewrite it from scratch with new ideas now that the overarching plot is more clear.
